WRITING, SPEAKING, THINKING II
Hum 102, Fall 2010
Office: 413 Cullimore Hall
Hours: T, 11:30-12:30; Th, 2:30-3:30, and by appointment
Mail: Humanities Dep't, NJIT, Newark, NJ 07102
Professor Burt Kimmelman
Phone: 973.596.3376, 3266
Fax: 973.642.4689
E-Mail: kimmelman@njit.edu
Website: http://web.njit.edu/~kimmelma
Course Digital Venue,
Moodle Conferencing System portal: http://moodle.njit.edu

COURSE DESCRIPTION

This course is meant to continue development of your communication skills, especially as concerns writing, picking up where Hum 101 leaves off. What is new will be analytical discussions of literature (i.e., fiction, poetry, drama, as well as some nonfiction). Essay writing will once again be a core activity and some class meetings will involve students reading each other's work and critiquing it, and thus arriving at a comprehension of what a workable and interesting polemical and informed essay is. Other components of the course will have to do with learning how to go about finding material for, composing and documenting a researched essay, and presenting ideas to an audience both orally and visually

COURSE TEXTS

Booth, Alison, J. Paul Hunter, and Kelly J. Mays. Eds. The Norton Introduction to Literature. Portable Ed. New York: W. W. Norton, 2006.

Roen, Duane, et. al. The McGraw-Hill Guide: Writing for College, Writing for Life. 2nd Ed. New York: McGraw-Hill, 2010. [N.B. This is an on-line textbook, primarily, and the digital version is much less expensive than the hard copy version; also, the digital version has material the hard copy does not. Access to the course eTextbook may be purchased in the NJIT Bookstore or online. To purchase online at www.shopmcgraw-hill.com, use this ISBN: 9780077376369. Hardcopies may also be purchased in the NJIT bookstore. Various links at course website.

Additional Course Readings in Moodle.

W. W. Norton website: wwnorton.com/literature (registration code, to be found inside your copy of The Norton Anthology of Literature, will be needed)

Help for Doing Literary Analysis:  http://web.njit.edu/~kimmelma/LitAnalysisHelp.html

Humanities Resources Links (http://web.njit.edu/~kimmelma/humanities.htm).


Writing Guides Links (http://web.njit.edu/~kimmelma/writing.html).


Documentation Guides Links (
http://web.njit.edu/~kimmelma/documentation.html).

Annotated Bibliography Sample

Abbreviations for Marking Papers

Research Roadmap portal:
http://library.njit.edu/researchhelpdesk/instruction/

Moodle Conferencing System portal: http://moodle.njit.edu

Guidelines for a  Successful Oral Presentation (see also
SUGGESTED PROTOCOL FOR TEAM ORAL REPORTS toward the bottom of page):

http://go.owu.edu/~dapeople/ggpresnt.html

http://www.auburn.edu/~burnsma/oralpres.html

http://www.ruf.rice.edu/~riceowl/oral_presentations.htm

http://web.cba.neu.edu/~ewertheim/skills/oral.htm

 


COURSE REQUIREMENTS

   N.B.: All out-of-class writing, when submitted as hard copy, must have been word processed in a 12’ font on 8 1/2" x 11" paper, double-spaced with one-inch margins, spell checked, and to the best of one's ability grammar checked.  If on occasion use is made of the ideas or words of someone else in one's writing, then the source(s) of those ideas and/or words must be cited thoroughly; that is, when appropriate, papers must be fully documented (you must cite sources—using footnotes, endnotes, or parenthetical documentation, which include specific page numbers keyed to particular passages in one's text, or section or paragraph numbers for websites, and complete bibliographical information at the end of your document). Of course, the final research paper must also be fully documented. For this paper, a minimum of three secondary research sources (one of which hard copy) must be utilized and cited.  PAPERS NOT MEETING ALL OF THESE REQUIREMENTS WILL NOT BE READ AND WILL NOT RECEIVE CREDIT.

 

^ Term Paper Announcement:
Consists of 1) a descriptive paper title and subtitle, 2) a one-sentence thesis statement that includes the point of your argument, the breadth of that argument, and the argument’s significant concepts and details, 3) a one-paragraph description of the writing or argumentative strategy to be employed in your paper, 4) a bibliography of all sources both primary and secondary in MLA format and alphabetized. For the purposes of this assignment, use must be made of at least three secondary research sources (one of them hard copy) excluding textbooks, encyclopedias and dictionaries.

^^ Term Paper:
Consists of: 1) a descriptive paper title and subtitle, 2) a full-length essay, 3) a bibliography in MLA format and alphabetized. For the purposes of this assignment, use must be made of at least three secondary research sources (one of them hard copy) excluding textbooks, encyclopedias and dictionaries.
N.B.: While one resesarch paper source must be hard copy--and there is no substitute for physically going to a library to do research--a downloaded article from one of the NJIT Library's databases can be considered as a hard copy source (it is best to check with the instructor about the suitability of such an article). Research for the essays might begin with the MLA Bibliography (locally to be found at the Rutgers-Newark library research room--ask a librarian there to show you how it works)

 
COURSE SCHEDULE*

8/31:    Introduction to the course. Tour of Moodle course platform.

9/2:      Tour of course digital venues and protocols. Discussion of portfolios (digital and hard copy). Creation of schedule for Oral/Visual Group Reports established.

9/7:      “Why Science…” (download in Moodle) due. Research Roadmap Activity 1 due. Discussion of polemical essay form.

9/9:      In-class drafting of Writing Autobiography. Diagnostic essay in Moodle due.

9/14:    “President Abbas…” (download in Moodle) due. Chapter 8 in Connect due. Draft 2 of Writing Autobiography (with first, handwritten, draft attached) due. Discussion of Term Paper topics.

9/16:    Trifles, pp. 653-63 in Norton Introduction to Literature due. Research Roadmap Activity 2 due. Discussion and dramatic readings of play. Discussion comparing dramatic and argumentative texts.

9/21:    Editorial (composed by group in Wiki venue) due. Readings and discussions of student editorials.

9/23:    “Introduction,” pp. 4-10 & “Girl,” p. 385 in Norton, & “A Child’s Christmas...” (download in Moodle) due. Term Paper title and subtitle, and thesis statement due. Discussion of point of view, and of voice, in both nonfiction and fiction.

9/28:    "Flight Patterns,” pp. 37-50 & “The Management of Grief,” pp. 224-36 in Norton due. Discussion of Term Paper Announcement (according to guidelines at course website).

9/30:    Memoir or voiced fiction/autobiography due. Readings and discussions of student works.

10/5:    "Alma" (download in Moodle), “Cathedral,” pp. 21-32, "A Conversation...," pp. 32-36, & “Hills Like…,” pp. 114-18 in Norton due. Term Paper Announcement due. Discussion of stories.

10/7:    “Love Medicine, ” pp. 269-85 & “Sonny’s Blues,” pp. 81-105 in Norton due. Connect Chapters 12-16 due. Research Roadmap Lesson 3 due. Discussion of the polemical essay, its form and purpose.

10/12:  “Araby,” pp. 328-32 and “A Good Man Is Hard to Find,” pp. 369-80 in Norton due.

10/14:  Connect Chapters 19-20 due. Research Roadmap In-Class Seminar with Van Houten Librarian (report to assigned room, not to classroom).

10/19:  Polemical Essay 1 (researched, fully cited, analyzing one or more short stories discussed in class) due. Peer reviews of student polemical essays.    

10/21:  “How Do I…,” pp. 399-400, “To My Dear…,” pp. 411-12 in Norton, “somewhere i have…” & “Definition…” (download in Moodle) due. Research Roadmap Activity 4 due. Portfolio Assessment.

10/26:  No class. 

10/28:  Draft 2 of Polemical Essay 1 (with prior draft and peer-reviewers’ comments attached) due. Readings and discussions of Draft 2 of Polemical Essay 1.

11/2:    “Those Winter…,” p. 427, “My Papa’s…,” p. 470, “Daddy,” p. 605 in Norton, “Eating Alone,” “My Mother” & other poems (download in Moodle) due.

11/4:    Draft 1 of Essay 2 (Term Paper on a literary work or works in Norton, or on another topic approved ahead of time by instructor) due. Readings and discussions of Term Papers (Essay 2). Peer reviews of Term Papers.

11/9:    “The Red Wheelbarrow” and “This is…,” 472, “In a Station…,” 610 in Norton. “Inklings” and other poems (download in Moodle) due. Polemical Essay 1 (draft 2) returned.

11/11:  Draft 2 of Essay 2 (Term Paper) due. Readings and Discussions of revised Term Papers.

11/16:  "Barbie Doll," pp. 416-17, "Postcard...,," pp. 428-29, "Sudden...," p. 437, "We Real Cool," p. 444, "Digging," pp. 59-91, & "Harlem," p. 592 in Norton due. Draft 3 of Polemical Essay 1 (with all prior drafts and peer review critiques) due.

11/18-12/7:     Individual Oral/Visual Reports on Term Papers. Diagnostic essay in Moodle due on 12/7. Polemical Essay 1 (draft 3) returned on 12/7.

12/9: Final Draft of Term Paper (with all prior drafts and peer-review comments attached) and portfolio (both hard copy—to be left with Humanities department secretary—and digital) due. Research Roadmap Activity 5 due.


* All assignments, readings, etc., must have been prepared prior to class meetings on due dates. Revisions of work must be accompanied, when submitted for evaluation, by all prior drafts. Also: Your essays may be read aloud in class. <><>


COURSE GRADE

Short Polemical Essay (Polemical Essay 1)                                                                                                       15%

Term Paper (Polemical Essay 2)                                                                                                                      20%

Term Paper Announcement                                                                                                                             10%

Literary-Critical Moodle Posts and Responses                                                                                                    10%

Writing Autobiography                                                                                                                                       5%

Editorial (Group Project)                                                                                                                                    5%

Memoir or Voiced Fiction/Autobiography                                                                                                             5%

Oral/Visual Reports (Group and Individual)                                                               (5% each)                           10%

Research Roadmap                                                                                                                                           10%

Class Participation                                                                                                                                              5%




SUGGESTED PROTOCOL FOR TEAM ORAL REPORTS

Introduction

Spokesperson for group (preferably Speaker #1 or #4) puts up first viewgraph (topic of report) and defines:

A. Topic of the group report
B. Introduces self and other members of the team (both first and last names)--Viewgraph #2
C. Explains briefly how the topic has been broken down and what aspect of the topic each speaker will address.
D. Introduces Speaker #1.

Speaker #1:

A. Thanks spokesperson
B. Restates his/her particular topic (with viewgraph)
C. Addresses topic (with viewgraphs)
D. Introduces Speaker #2

Speaker #2:

A. Thanks Speaker #1
B. Restates his/her particular topic (with viewgraph)
C. Addresses topic (with viewgraphs)
D. Introduces Speaker #3

Speaker #3:

A. Thanks Speaker #2
B. Restates his/her particular topic (with viewgraph)
C. Addresses topic (with viewgraphs)
D. Introduces Speaker #4

Speaker #4:

A. Thanks Speaker #3
B. Restates his/her particular topic (with viewgraph)
C. Addresses topic (with viewgraphs)
D. Asks for Questions (or reintroduces Spokesperson)

Question and Answer Period:

A. Spokesperson asks if there are questions
B. Recognizes questioner and directs question to appropriate member of team
C. Allows any other member of team to comment
D. After last question, thanks audience.
 

ABBREVIATIONS FOR MARKING PAPERS

Key: Abbreviation - Meaning
  A  -     Article
 Agr  -   Agreement
 Awk -   Awkward
 CS  -   Comma Splice
 Dic  -   Diction
 Exp   -  Explain
 FS  -   Fused Sentences
 RO  -   Run On Sentence
 SF  -   Sentence Fragment
 Sp  -   Spelling
 SS   -  Sentence Structure
 Syn  -   Syntax or Word Order
 Tr   -  Transition
 Un   -  Unclear
 Uncl   -  Unclear
 Us  -   Usage
 V  -   Verb
 Va    - Vague
 VF  -   Verb Form
 VT  -   Verb Tense
 WF -   Word Form
 WW -   Wrong Word
 

COURSE PORTFOLIO (Hard Copy -- Digital Portfolio is to be Created in Mahara via Moodle)

At the end of the term an organized and otherwise neatly arranged portfolio must be submitted, consisting of ALL your work, including all drafts of essays as well as materials used in preparing for and delivering oral reports.

1. Punch holes in your papers to coincide with the holes in, and bind the papers within, a portfolio cover.

2. Place a gummed label (or equivalent) on outside with:

Your Name

Hum 102
Fall 2010
Dr. Kimmelman

3. All papers should be arranged with the latest revised version of a paper on top earlier versions, followed by the previous version, and so on (i.e., in “descending” order). The Portfolio should be arranged in sections (in “ascending” order), with the first section comprised of the first paper assignment, the second section the second paper assignment, and so on.

4. At the front of the portfolio place your course syllabus followed by a Table of Contents that lists each assignment, the date it was submitted, and the grade (if any) it received.